peer review of Paul's summary

Read the summary carefully and answer the following questions:
1. What do you like best about your peer’s summary? (Why? How might he or she do more of it?)
I like Paul’s summary which is clear and formal. It is easy to understand.

2. Is it clear what is being summarized? (i.e. Did your peer list the source, and cite it correctly?)
I think it is really clear and he also cites it correctly.

3. Is the thesis of the original essay clear in the summary? (Write out what you think that thesis is.)
Yes, it is clear in the summary. I think that thesis is “A young man had admire a sports car and told his father that he wanted to get one in the graduation day.

4. If you have read the original source, did you identify the same thesis? (If not, how does it differ?)
Yes, I can identify the same thesis.

5. Did your peer miss any key points from his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
No, I think his summary include whole key points.

6. Did your peer include any of his own opinions in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
No, he didn’t add any of his own opinions. He followed the original article.

7. Did your peer include any unimportant details in his or her summary? (If so, what are they?)
No, I don’t think there are any unimportant details in Paul’s summary.

8. Were any points in the summary lost? (If so, where and how might it be fixed? Why do you think it might be important?)
Yes, I think he miss the topic sentence. For his first sentence “A young man had admire a sports car and told his father that he wanted to get one in the graduation day”, I think it is thesis. I think there is a miss before this sentence.

A full box of kisses-summary

A story some time age is about a man punished his three-year-ole daughter for wasting a roll of gold wrapping paper. He was angry when the child wanted to decorate a box under the Christmas tree. However, his daughter gave him a gift with her kisses. At beginning, he was angry because he didn’t fine anything in the box. After realization he was crushed, and begged for her forgiveness. It is said that the man kept the gift by his bed. When he was discouraged, he would take out the gift and remember the love of the child.

The Graduation Present-summary

A young man was getting ready to graduate from college. He told his father he had admired a sport car and knew his father will buy it for him. The young man was looking forward to receive the sport car when the graduation day came. But he was angry after he receives a Bible from his father in his graduation day. He stormed out of the house and wasn’t come back. Many years later, he had a successful business, beautiful home and wonderful family. He started to think about his father and plan to go to him. Before his plan, he received a telegram telling him his father had passed away, and willed his possessions to his son. He discovered the Bible when he back home with sadness and regret. He opened the Bible and read some words and a car key dropped from the back of the Bible. There were the dealer’s name, the date of his graduation and the words “Paid in Full” on the tag.

How do you change school culture?-summery

School leaders have some laments for school culture. It is not easy to change because the policies and procedures are deeply embedded. But cultural change is challenging and time-consuming. It is not only possible but necessary especially stakeholders who use the word "culture" to block leadership initiatives, stifle innovation, and maintain the status quo. There is a discussion about how to change the culture of schools and also have four essentials when it comes to lasting cultural change.

Click-final

Watching TV programs and films is a major habit for people nowadays. Some of TV programs and films will give people inspiration, but some won’t. I saw a film named Click. Although it is a comedy, it give audience some ideas.

Click is an interesting and funny film. The actor Adam Sandler uses his own way and abounding body action to make the character become funny. This film is about a man who was an architect and had a busy life with work. Although he spent much time on work, his boss did not notice his dilligence. He was disappointed because he worked hard and did not have time to accompany his family. The entire thing he wanted to do was buying a remote control which was all-round. This remote control not only could change channels, but also could change life. When the leading man got it, he moved himself to a happy situation when he faced frustration. Because of this, his work became more successful, but he also missed something such as the time with his family. In the end of this film, he realized he did not control the remote control but the remote control controlled him. He also knew that everything is not perfect.

Through this film, I really know about many things. Everyone wants to have smooth life including the leading man of this film. But everything is not favorable. If it is smooth without working hard, people can not learn the experiences and gain knowledge. It is more important and attentive to do well during the process rather than to get the result. We have to appreciate and hug our life because life makes us learn a lot and become strong.

Click-draft 2

Watching TV programs and films is a major habit for people nowadays. Some of TV programs and films will give people inspiration but some won’t. I saw a film named Click. Although it is a comedy, it give audience some ideas.

Click is an interesting and funny film. The actor Adam Sandler use his own way and abounding body action to make the character become funny. This film is about a man who was an architect and had a busy life with work. Although he spent much time on work, his boss did not notice his dilligence. He was disappointed because his work and did not have time to accompany his family. The entire thing he wanted to do was buying a remote control which was all-round. This remote control not only could change channels, but also could change life. When the leading man got it, he moved himself to happy situation when he faced frustration. Because of this, his work became more successful, but he also missed something such as the time with his family. In the end of this film, he realized he did not control the remote control but the remote control controlled him. He also knew that everything is not perfect.

Through this film, I really know about many things. Everyone wants to have smooth life including the leading man of this film. But everything is not favorable. If it is smooth without working hard, people can not learn the experiences and gain knowledge. It was more important and attentive to do well during the process rather than the result. We have to appreciate and hug our life because life make us learn a lot and become strong.

pie chart

This table shows the percentage of entertainment news. As can be seen, about thirty three precent people think the news are over amativeness and violence. Other thirty one precent people do not think it is amativeness and violence. Fewer people(26%) do not have any opinion and 10% of peoople do not have choice.

film

Watching TV programs and films are major habit for people nowadays. Some of TV programs and films will give people inspiration but some won’t. I had seen a film named Click. Although it is a comedy, it gave audiences some ideas.

Click is an interesting and funny film. The actor Adam Sandler use his own way and abounding body action to make the character which he acted becoming funny. This film is about a man who was an architect and had a busy life on work. Although he spent many time on work, his boss did not notice his care. He was miscarrying, and did not have time to companion his family. The entire thing he wanted to do was buying a remote control which was all-round when he was getting mad. This remote control not just can change channels, but also can change life. When the leading man got it, he moved himself to happy situation when he faced defeat. Because of this, his work became more successful, but he also missed something such as the time with his family.

Through this film, I really know about many things. Everyone wants to have smooth life including the leading man of this film. In the end of this film, he realized he did not control the remote control but the remote control controlled him. He also knew that not everything is perfect. With the result, it was more important to go through the process no matter it was happy or sad. We have to appreciate and hug our life, because it can make us learning things and becoming strong.